You have made a good start here and you have covered everything needed. However, you have just copied some of your definitions and although you source them at the end, you have not shown that you understand them, as you haven’t attempted to explain them yourself – you must do this. So, firstly, please go through your post and add you own explanation of the terms. Looking for information on the internet is tricky as not everyone knows what they are talking about and also, so many words have multiple meanings, you don’t always get something in the context that you need, so own words is best – ask me about any you are not sure about. Secondly, you need to find some specific examples from the media industry (like you did for the Megan Ellison) to get the higher grades. Things like finding an example of a film that broke copyright and finding an example of a film where there was an accident on set, etc. Finally, you need to check your work through after it is finished to check for typos and spelling errors – proof reading is very important and means you can pick up on your own mistakes and improve the work.
You have made a good start here and you have covered everything needed. However, you have just copied some of your definitions and although you source them at the end, you have not shown that you understand them, as you haven’t attempted to explain them yourself – you must do this.
ReplyDeleteSo, firstly, please go through your post and add you own explanation of the terms. Looking for information on the internet is tricky as not everyone knows what they are talking about and also, so many words have multiple meanings, you don’t always get something in the context that you need, so own words is best – ask me about any you are not sure about.
Secondly, you need to find some specific examples from the media industry (like you did for the Megan Ellison) to get the higher grades. Things like finding an example of a film that broke copyright and finding an example of a film where there was an accident on set, etc.
Finally, you need to check your work through after it is finished to check for typos and spelling errors – proof reading is very important and means you can pick up on your own mistakes and improve the work.